bad job

By Anonymous -
I heard a loud roar coming from the couch.
I heard a loud booming voice announcing “leave me alone”.
I saw droopy eyes as they were closing down.
I felt responsible to leave him alone
I felt annoyed I couldn’t play.
I noticed he was annoyed that he had work.
I noticed he wanted a new job because he has to wake up at 4:15.
I wondered will he quit?
I wondered will he get a new job?

To be continued!

Comments

  1. Unicron12 March 2018 at 10:52

    Very moving, your descriptions create emotions for the reader. Amazingly done Riley, what development we're seeing in your last year at Hamilton East. I'm very proud of you xx

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    1. Anonymous12 March 2018 at 22:35

      Thanks also my writing is about my dad

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  2. Judith Te Au12 March 2018 at 21:22

    Beautiful writing Riley i am so proud of your use of vocabulary. love mum xx

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